A.J Murphy

I'm in too! Post pro later, when I get it finished.

My heart skipped a beat when I turned and saw Aisha suffocating. "Help!" I screamed, grabbing the teams attention. I swam over the Aisha as fast as I could. I ...

I smile over at Thaniel. "You're starting to sound like Angler." Angler rolls his eyes. "That isn't a bad thing." He states. I laugh lightly. Returning my attention to the ...

Although I had dived a few times before, the sight was still wonderful to witness. The shiny glint from the crack caught my eyes drawing my fascination to it immediately. ...

I look around at everyone in the room, practically seeing the tension. In all honesty I felt nervous as well, I just didn't like to see it on other people. ...

I smiled at the two girls. "Glad to have you guys on the team by the way." I tell them. I pull my black hair into a ponytail. Checking the ...

I smiled at the two girls. "No need to worry. If we stick together we'll be safe." I told them for reassurance. "Let's just hope no one needs to use ...

Hey, I wanted to say that I like the plot line, and the other things I was going to point out have already been said, so again be careful of ...

I witnessed the scene between Thaniel and the two girls deciding not to get involved at that moment. walked over the Angler and Thaniel. "Girls." I sighed jokingly. "One of ...

I introduced myself to the rest of the crew. This was going to be an interesting trip. I glanced over at the girl who stood near the wall. I smiled ...

(Avery is a girl, by the way. hey mistakes happen) "What do you think we'll find down there?" I wonder out loud. Thaniel shrugs. "Fish I suppose." He answers, I ...

Avery I walked into the room where the two friends were conversing. "Life without a little risk is safe, which sometimes makes it boring." I exclaimed with a small smile. ...

Diver Trapped and unsure, the divers don't know what to do. They turn to the ancient city, hoping it might have means of escape. Name: Avery Thomson Age: 15 gender: ...

I love it! can't wait to read more.

Thanks for the critiques from before. I appreciate them. I swear it isn't as cliche as it sounds. ~~~ “What is taking them so long!?” Ella mumbled suddenly, taking Justin ...